如何写好初一期末英语作文分析 初一期末写作指导 一basicrules(写作规则) 1。信息提取找全信息2。信息加工重组信息(适当的加入细节) 3。列提纲确定句式,关联词,过渡词,较高级的句型和词汇 方法一:善用词汇甚至善用高级词汇 A。Theylistenedtothemusiconthebeach。 B。Theyenjoyedthemusiconthebeach。 AIwishyoucanhelpme。 BI’mlookingforwardtoyourhelp。 ATheyarrivedearly。 BTheyarrivedasearlyastheycould。 AHisdogwassavedatlast。Hewasverysurprised。 BTohissurprise,hisdogwassavedatlast。 AIthinklearningEnglishisinteresting。 BIfinditreallyfuntolearnEnglish。 AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment。 BIt’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment。 方法二:活用多种句型 ASheisveryyoung。 Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox。 BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox。 CSheissoyoungthatshecan’tcarrythe DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe 表示并列或递进:and,aswellas,bothand,what’smorenotonlybutalso,neithernor 2。表示选择:or,eitheror 3。表示转折:but,however,althoughhough,afterall,anyway 4。表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,asaresult 5。表示条件:if,unless 6。表示对比:instead,notbut,while,inthesameway,ontheonehandontheotherhand 7。表示解释:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords,totellthetruth 8。表示顺序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend 9。表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,infact 10。表示结论:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,inshort 用恰当的连词,连接下面各句。 HowdopeoplespendtheirvacationWemadeasurveyandhereisourreport。 Accordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel。Andsomepeoplestayathome。TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet。Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents。However,afewpeoplework。Comeandenjoyyourvacation。Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell。 增加连接词:HowdopeoplespendtheirvacationWemadeasurveyandhereisourreport。Accordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel。Andsomepeoplestayathome。TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet。Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents。However,afewpeoplework。Comeandenjoyyourvacation。Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell。 美文赏析:Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport。Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays。Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest。Andto visitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed。However,afewpeoplehavetowork。Comeandenjoyyourvacation。Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell。 增加谚语后的效果。 Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays。Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest。However,afewpeoplehavetowork。Asthesayinggoes,AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy。Comeandenjoyyourvacation。Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell。 谚语总结: However,afewpeoplehavetowork。 Asthesayinggoes,“Allworkandnoplaymakes Jackadullboy。”Comeandenjoyyourvacation。People whorelaxwellworkwell。 方法四:妙用引文和例子(多用于第二段) Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth。Forexample,wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,stopusingnapkins,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy。 Ioftenhelpmyparentsdohousework,suchaswashingdishes,foldingtheclothes,takingoutthetrashandsoon。 方法五结尾:提出倡议或号召 Let’s Doitnow!Don’tdoitagain! Asstudents,weshouldstartfromourselves。 Don’twait。Joinusnow! Starttojoinusnow! Don’tputitoff!Becomeavolunteertoday! Howamazing!Ican’twait! Saveanimals!SaveOurselves!Saveourplanet! Don’thesitate(犹豫)。Itwillbegreatfun! 怎样保护动物的优美语句 1。weshouldn’teatwildanimals。Weshouldkeepthemawayfromourdinner。Inthisway,therewillnotbewildanimalsonsale。Ithinkthehuntersandkillerswillbecomefewerandfewer。 2Weneedtoprotectanimalsbetter。Weshouldgivethemfreshwatertodrink。Weshouldmaketheforestsbiggerforanimalsindangertolivein。Weshouldadvicepeoplenottokillanimalsbeacausetheyareourfriends! 3weshouldprotecttheenvironment。Weshouldstoppeoplefromcuttingtreesdown。Withouttrees,wildanimalswilllosetheirhome。Andwewillloseouranimalfriends。Allofusshouldtryourbesttoprotectanimals。 有关音乐的优美语句 1。Almosteveryoneisfondofmusic。Iamamusiclover。 2。Listeningtomusicisahobbyinmylife。 3。Listeningtomusicwillmakemefeelrelaxed。 4。WheneverIfeelsad,Icanjustturnontheradioandlistentosomemusic。 5。MusiccancheermeupwhenIamsad。 6。feelingsofcountrypeople。Popmusiccanmakeusexcitedandhappy。 7。Iamwillingtosharetheirhappinessandtrouble。8。Musiccomesfromtheheartandflowsintotheheart。 9。Musicisakindoflanguagethatallthepeopleintheworldcanunderstandit 〔如何写好初一期末英语作文分析〕相关文章: